Corrections and re-submission

I am currently fixing up my proposal in order to re-submit it.

This experience has been exiting seeing my writing style develop with the assistance of professional correction.

The temple liked the idea that I am writing a grant for them, but found it even more exited to  be able to receive a hard copy of my work recently…(prior to professor editing)

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New style

 

After extensive critiquing, and in some cases straight up bashing of my horrible writing style that lacks all grammatical discipline, I have settled on a new subject. 

This new subject revolves around the Dao temple still so as you all can imagine, I am relieved and maybe happy. 

I will be requesting the necessary funds for the purchase of tree trimming equipment in order to for the temple to keep up with there own grounds upkeep. 

I’m exited to witness my own evolution of ideas finally settle upon a subject that my teachers are willing to allow me to pursue. 

I like gum, candy, and Scandinavian melodic metal.

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Proposal writing

I’m currently writing my proposal.  I’m focusing on a completely new topic outside of the Shien Deh temple. This is actually my 3rd topic since I have started this course.  It is  hard and frustrating because Ive spent days on end either working around the temple or attending the temple seminars in order to fully understand the great things the temple and its environment in general has done and is currently doing for people.

I am now doing my best, to turn in something that  is considered relevant and acceptable.

P.S  2:30 am.

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